2008年1月23日星期三

再見了..徒徒..

真是百感交集的一天..
前天是短期内見徒徒的最後一次..
爲什麽呢?
因爲徒徒一家人搬去檳城了..
以后见面的机会会变得很少,很难..

please allow me to blog in english.
i want to improve my poor english.
hehe..
those peoples who went to this gathering are:
seethor,keijin,jiachang,jialer,keiyi,hanley,weiheng n me..
the purpose we went out is just for seethor..
our gathering plans were as usual..
we decided to go redbox first,after that we only go to watch movie.
the begining of our activity was quite boring.
maybe we all long time no see each other(besides krox and me).hehe..

our activity was reached the climax while four of those guys were blackmail by a middle age's man.
this happen was occuring outside the redbox.
the four pity guys are keijin,seethor,hanley and keiyi.
according the description by keijin,
the man told them he is the underworld from tun aminah.
hmmm..i think this is not the main idea in this post,
so i lazy to continue this story..
haha..
after we settle the blackamil problem,
it was quite late already.
we just cancel our plan of watching movie.
after kjin,kyi,weiheng and hanley went back to home,
seethor,krox,jialer and me eat something at sushi king in city square..
we chat and took pictures there..
we were very enjoy n happy at there..


sushi king in city square.


yummy yummy~~


seethor and me^^


jialer and me..


krox and me..


four of us..hehe..
another one is transparent one because he become the photographer..
wakaka..


friendship 4-ever^^


see thor gave me this letter and two little shell fishs..
the letter is so touching to me.
i hope we can meet with see thor again soon and wish him all the best in penang..

1 条评论:

Wanderer 说...

1. Those who went out to the gathering were...
2. PEOPLES <- Normal English don't have this word.. Only used in legal form of the language, like when Lawyers presenting a case... We only use PEOPLE (the singular form)
3. the purpopse we went out >>>CHANGE TO>> All of us went out just for SeeThor
4. We decided to go for Redbox first, thereafter we went to watch/catch a movie
5. the beginning... TWO N
6. Maybe it is because we haven't seen each other for a long time
7. Our activity reached a climax when KJ,ST,Ley and Kyi were blackmailed by a middle age man
8. The incident occurred outside of Redbox
9. Based on KeiJin's description
10. The man told them he was an Underworld member from Tun Aminah
11. After we had settled the blackmailing issue
12. As it was quite late already, we decided to cancel our plans on the movie
13. After kJin, kYi, WeiHeng and Ley went home
14. ST, krOx, JiaLer and I ate some delicious sushi at City Square's Sushi King
15. We were happy and enjoyed out time there..

基本上,你所要表达的意识是很明显的,但是你在用词和语法方面非常弱。。
要多加注意。。。加油哦!!!